Reuben Bruckman

E.G. M2

Current Grade: D1

27/6/19

How to Improve your grade:

R091:

The create timeline makes no sense. as it jumps back and forth throughout the years of the 21st century. It also show no consideration for the gaming platforms of other decades.

Has supplied limited information for Xbox. MUST discuss the platforms of more than one company.

Don't forget mobile gaming platforms.

You have investigated sport, FPS, open world, platform, and adventure games.

You have an accurate understanding of the objectives of each game but should really discuss how these games have changed over time.

R087:

You have to complete a review of 4 interactive products. You have reviewed four but you should remember to justify your decisions at all points (why do you think that is the purpose? Why do you think that is the audience?)

You need to identify EVERYTHING you need to complete the task. You should divide these into 3 sections:

1. Hardware

2. Software

3. Peripherals

Identify which of each you need and why you need them and what they are for (I need a computer to create the work, I need Fireworks to make my logo, I need a keyboard to type up my comments)

As this is a multimedia product you need to identify what your PowerPoint will contain and what file types each one will be:

In addition to identifying who the client is and what they want (as part of the client brief) you should identify what you are going to create and why (I will be making a PowerPoint because I can add multimedia and use hyperlinks to make it interactive)

When describing who the target audience are you need to state what you will put in your PowerPoint to appeal to them directly.

There are LOTS of very dull slides in your product (Slides 4-9) you also need to include FAR more multimedia elements (music, gifs, videos, animation) There is also no real hyperlinks (remember, your product must use NON-LINEAR navigation)