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Alfie Simmons
EG: 8
Current Grade:6
26/3/19
How to improve your grade:
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R087:
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Your work is coming together nicely but there are still areas for you to improve upon:
1. Your client brief must explain who your target audience is AND how you intend to appeal to them. Remember the audience is "active people" there is no age or gender here so DON'T mention these things.
2. You have no work plan, fortunately as you have created the products already you know what needs to be done and how long it took you. You're targeted high so make sure you create a Gantt chart with contingencies built in.
3. When discussing legislation you MUST explain exactly what you will do/have done to make sure you don't break any of them. For example, how have you avoided breaking copyright.
4. Your interactive product has poor timing. I'd make the song start automatically. Many slides are missing text and there appears to be no gifs (get some from www.gifon007.eu)
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5. When you have finished the product make sure that you have saved it as a "POWERPOINT SHOW" show me in screen prints how you saved it and why you chose POWERPOINT show as the final format.
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6. Your evaluation must cover these areas:
i. How you met the client requirements
ii. What you think are strong parts of your website
iii. What you think are weak points of your website
iv. If you could make this again what you do differently and WHY??
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